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Also, how can you be sure that you don't look like a jester to someone else? Do you see yourself through others' eyes? If the answer is no, then you probably don't know how they think or what they think and as a result, it's very likely that they see you differently than you see yourself. ^^
That's just a random thought though.
"Do I look like a jester to you? That's all well and good, but I'm not here to entertain you."
This way, we keep the original question as well as not telling the reader what they see.
Another possible change is to "clarify" things, like this:
"Do I look like a jester to you? Well, I am not. I'm not here to entertain you."
It would make it easier for me to think up things if I knew what you want to keep. I tried to keep as much of the original here as possible.